Hi there, my name is Sarah and I am a student in LH3 at Gisborne Intermediate School. I really like the way you used bright vibrant colours which makes it more eye catching and makes me want to read it more. It made me think of a similar post I did on my blog . Have you thought about changing your title because it there is a mistake but other than that I really liked your About Me post.. If you would like to see my learning, my blog is https://gisintsarahb.blogspot.com/
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Hi there, my name is Sarah and I am a student in LH3 at Gisborne Intermediate School. I really like the way you used bright vibrant colours which makes it more eye catching and makes me want to read it more. It made me think of a similar post I did on my blog . Have you thought about changing your title because it there is a mistake but other than that I really liked your About Me post.. If you would like to see my learning, my blog is https://gisintsarahb.blogspot.com/
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